Review Detail of WithJ in Way to the heavens

The writing overall could use some improvements, especially the author should look out for run-on sentences which I found quite a lot of throughout the posted chapters. Author might want to pay attention to the use of tenses as well for there were switches between past vs present. Despite the grammar errors, it was understandable and easy to follow the premise of the story. With respect to the plot development, it is moving at a reasonable speed. There seems to be action in every chapter so it is something to keep the readers on their toes about. The characters continues to be developed as the story moves along. Since the story is still fairly new, more character and plot development is expected to happen. If you are a fan of cultivation type stories where the MC is an underdog then give this a try.