Review Detail of VhielF in Princess Lyn: Fleeting Dreams
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There were some redundant ideas here and there but the way your write is simple yet beautiful. I like how it is smooth to a point where I am already several chapters away without me noticing ahahaha. I would love to read the previous book hehe. I like the story and the development of the characters. I was somewhat lost at some parts but I am sure that can be patched up as it may only be me xD over all, love it :D
Princess Lyn: Fleeting Dreams
XOMatsumaeohana
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Thank you π€π€ Yeah, I'll go back to those errors so if you see anything specifically I'll go back and make the changes. π This is actually book 1. I wrote book 2 first, that's why it has more chapters. It's called Queen Lyn: Clash Of Kingdoms(currently on hold since I decided to finish this first). But yeah, better read this one first π€
XOMatsumaeohana:Thank you π€π€ Yeah, I'll go back to those errors so if you see anything specifically I'll go back and make the changes. π This is actually book 1. I wrote book 2 first, that's why it has more chapters. It's called Queen Lyn: Clash Of Kingdoms(currently on hold since I decided to finish this first). But yeah, better read this one first π€
XOMatsumaeohana:Thank you π€π€ Yeah, I'll go back to those errors so if you see anything specifically I'll go back and make the changes. π This is actually book 1. I wrote book 2 first, that's why it has more chapters. It's called Queen Lyn: Clash Of Kingdoms(currently on hold since I decided to finish this first). But yeah, better read this one first π€
ππ No I know, I have to admit sometimes I don't have time to edit properly and just post the chapters πββοΈ Writing so many novels, it was only recently when I lessened the work load where I decided to focus on this π Hope you enjoy the story.
VhielF:Please dont forget.... ππ
I admittedly enjoy the story so much!!! I like it in so many ways :D but the other thing. Don't forget. I suppose you know what i mean? Hehe
XOMatsumaeohana:ππ No I know, I have to admit sometimes I don't have time to edit properly and just post the chapters πββοΈ Writing so many novels, it was only recently when I lessened the work load where I decided to focus on this π Hope you enjoy the story.
π I'll get to your review soon. I write very detailed reviews, so I tend to take my time. Give me a few days π€ I'll start tonight.
VhielF:I admittedly enjoy the story so much!!! I like it in so many ways :D but the other thing. Don't forget. I suppose you know what i mean? Hehe
Yehay! Reviews from readers like you are the best. Unlike some who just scan books then base their reviews from other reviews. But either way, I will still read this book xD
XOMatsumaeohana:π I'll get to your review soon. I write very detailed reviews, so I tend to take my time. Give me a few days π€ I'll start tonight.