Review Detail of SasakiYume in Princess Lyn: Fleeting Dreams

√ Writing Quality: Keeps getting better and better. Glad to see the author improving so much in such a short amount of time, shows she's paying attention to peoples advice. √Updates: Strangely stable for someone who has three stories. √ Character Development: The authors strong point. (Queen Orthez is interesting) √World Background: Getting a lot better. Glad to see gradual explanations in the chapters. √ Story Development: Focusing more on the romance side and yet building up suspense on the actual plot. Wonder who the real enemy is for this story, is it the Sound Kingdom or is it somebody else?