Review Detail of Winter_Prison in Princess Lyn: Fleeting Dreams

Going to give the author five stars, I know writing quality can be improved. But in contrast to her first story she's gotten so much better 👍 extra star for her efforts. Normally I break down my reviews, but since there's not a lot of chapters.. - If you've read QLCK you'll notice the contrast between the Lyn from when she's 22 and the present time frame for Princess Lyn when she's sixteen. Here we get a glim**e of the vague mysteries surrounding Lyn from Queen Lyn. Actually reading them alongside each other is quite fun, since you can connect the pieces. - The ML, on the other story he hasn't shown up yet. So I'm glad to see him at last. As usual the author does a great job describing her characters thoughts and feelings. - World Background: Only advice is to do it in small chunks, no need to rush. - This story has the potential to get into top rankings if the author maintains a balanced pace.