Review Detail of author_aruel in The Virgin Outcast Who Stole The Emperor's Heart

I am interested in the story and so far I have read the first 5 chapters. Good job with the world-building and with the character design. But I need to ask? Why are there so many spelling and phrasing errors? Is this a translated piece? I see it says Original on the label for this story (and I take that as being a work written in English first) but I feel like someone translated it and did not do a very good job. A lot of work is needed to polish the chapters and it will be great to put some work and truly give a mesmerizing reading experience for the reader.