Review Detail of Axicia_ in The Virgin Outcast Who Stole The Emperor's Heart

Honestly, I'm not too well-versed in the culture of ancient Korea to comment too much about it, but for the story... First, some typos, such as "Patience" and "Patients", it's slight, but the moment the typos are noticed, it'll feel glaring and detract from the story. In addition, some sentences are too long and has no periods. For the story, I already feel sorry for the MC, she's got turbulent times ahead :D other than the technical problems I described above, you hit all the right buttons with your description, and you paint a vivid image in the reader's mind. All in all, keep up the good work!