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MorfPPQ
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I've read through to Chapter 54, and here are my thoughts so far: Overall: This fiction is a translated cultivation story with some innocent 'cuteness' slice of life mixed in. MC is OP and a bit oblivious to his OP-ness. Supporting characters are warm and helpful. The overall pacing is relatively OK with it focused on MC's rapid advancement at absurd rates (he does in a couple of weeks what ordinary people take a couple of decades to accomplish). Style: Enjoyable for me; it has a standard cultivation/'slice of life' style of storytelling. Story: It is a cultivation power trip in a sandbox, with some character interaction and minor sub-plots. Grammar: Pretty good for a translation, there's always awkward parts when trying to do that, so I think it turned out well. Character Score: Characters are flat, simple, but likable. MC has no backstory, his obliviousness to 'before' he started never gets addressed (how did he appear there with Yuki?). MC's sole motivation is protecting himself and his companions. He's a simple power fantasy template.

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Golden Fox with System

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kanukai
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This is a review 👍🏾👍🏾

kanukai
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This is a review 👍🏾👍🏾

kanukai
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This is a review 👍🏾👍🏾

ImperialFox
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👍👍

Mhopedo77
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👍👍

RedLaw
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Lol. Don't know how to tell it. But this isn't a translated story. It's a purely original story wrote by the author. 😅. Frankly I think the synopsis and the author name should have been sufficient to understand that. Still if this story is so good that you thought that it was a translated story I guess I will give it a try

Suriel8224
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He is op? XD his waifus is more op than him or other random girls

SceQ
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True

Tanath
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Actually... it is a translated story. '-')

RedLaw:Lol. Don't know how to tell it. But this isn't a translated story. It's a purely original story wrote by the author. 😅. Frankly I think the synopsis and the author name should have been sufficient to understand that. Still if this story is so good that you thought that it was a translated story I guess I will give it a try
RedLaw
RedLawLv13RedLaw

It isn't. The author is publishing the same story in another platform dedicated to ******* stories. At it isn't translated from Chinese to English. When we say translated story, we speak about Chinese stories who are translated into English by translator. This story is a original story

Tanath:Actually... it is a translated story. '-')
Tanath
TanathLv13Tanath

It's a Brazilian story and he is probably translating from Google translator...

RedLaw:It isn't. The author is publishing the same story in another platform dedicated to ******* stories. At it isn't translated from Chinese to English. When we say translated story, we speak about Chinese stories who are translated into English by translator. This story is a original story
Lruska
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I am the creator of this novel. I just don't know how to write English, so I use google translator.

Tanath:It's a Brazilian story and he is probably translating from Google translator...
ATOM_xN
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nice review

i3bdul
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Rrr

_Rasputin_
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Good review

Thesoultaker88
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How is the harem and does mc love and treats his girls nice ?

ScionOfDegeneracy
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That explains it then

Lruska:I am the creator of this novel. I just don't know how to write English, so I use google translator.
ScionOfDegeneracy
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That explains it then

Lruska:I am the creator of this novel. I just don't know how to write English, so I use google translator.
MarquisofHell1
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👍👍👍👍👍👍

LoveForSYSTEMS
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it is pretty good for a google translator, there are bits and pieces that i do not understand, but that is great... i realized that i love slice of life+cultivation...

Lruska:I am the creator of this novel. I just don't know how to write English, so I use google translator.