Review Detail of yolo_ma in In the Shadow of a Storm

Item: In the Shadow of a Storm
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

yolo_maLv15yryolo_ma

I see grt potential in this story. But I need atlst 2 chapters a day or 2 chap Shud have around 2k words. This story hs some strong characters. Bedona is my fav. But I want a physical description of hers. Cnt picture her completely. I'll review again after 50 chaps.

In the Shadow of a Storm

ElsbroSparka

Liked it!

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DvaitaLv5Dvaita

Wow you want 2 chapters a day but can't even spell words fully, desire the assistance of autocorrect. Speak of entitlement and inane demands

4yr