Review Detail of Shiksha_Jerath in WIFE!!!! PLEASE BITE ME!!

I am reviewing the story when it's fifteen chapters in, so not that much to go on since the first few chapters are too short. The author has put a lot of thought into the classification of various races and their sub levels which makes for an interesting read and makes you wonder how all those species are inter - connected. There are a few grammatical errors here and there but it doesn't disrupt the flow of having a good read. :) I am sure that minuscule problem will be solved when the author edits that chapters later on. My advice to the author : Some of your characters seem to be too flat lined (that could be my misconception as well) but you can improve on it by adding titbits about them as you write further. Keep up the good work!