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Review Detail of May1st in WIFE!!!! PLEASE BITE ME!!

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May1st
May1stLv145yrMay1st

This is my first time giving a book an overall star, I love your story author, keep up the good work I just love the entire thing, good work author And most importantly, I LOVE SUPERNATURAL STORIES😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

WIFE!!!! PLEASE BITE ME!!

Miss_Lazy

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Miss_Lazy
Miss_LazyAuthorMiss_Lazy

Thanks...

5yr
May1st
May1stLv14May1st

You welcome Please work on the POV things, it's hard to know who is who

Miss_Lazy:Thanks...
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May1st
May1stLv14May1st

How did my overall star got deducted😬😬😬

Miss_Lazy:Thanks...
5yr
Miss_Lazy
Miss_LazyAuthorMiss_Lazy

I'll tryy.... But it's going to be hard...

5yr
Miss_Lazy
Miss_LazyAuthorMiss_Lazy

No one knows..

5yr
May1st
May1stLv14May1st

It shouldn't be that hard, For example, A shen POV: then you write her speech below Same as the other characters If you don't work on it, it might chase away some readers To be honest, I was already going like " what is going on " at chapter 5, my curiosity when it comes to supernatural stories makes me endure it

Miss_Lazy:I'll tryy.... But it's going to be hard...
5yr
Miss_Lazy
Miss_LazyAuthorMiss_Lazy

If I have time to edit this... I'm going to...

5yr
May1st
May1stLv14May1st

Please do, I really am enjoying the plot

5yr
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