Review Detail of Rxel in WIFE!!!! PLEASE BITE ME!!

The story is currently developing nicely as the author shows the progression of the plot. The world design is coming along nicely, though there could be more descriptions to give a better idea of the scene that the characters currently find themselves in. There are various grammar and punctuation mistakes that can be found, but it seems to be improving across the chapters. Also, there's one thing that you do with the speech. You tend to end with a "." . For example: "Still not crying. Then, I will give a reason to cry." She wickedly laughed. Should be > "Still not crying? Then, I will give you a reason to cry," she wickedly laughed. The reason this is done is because their actions have a connection to the sentence, which makes it flow better when it is read. You might want to consider adding a header whenever you change POV's since you like to switch between them frequently. This will help the readers feel more grounded when they are reading. Other than that, I am enjoying the way the story is flowing currently, and the plot is moving at a decent pace. The way you changed the font during different situations is nice. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to more :)