Review Detail of CCmei in WIFE!!!! PLEASE BITE ME!!

First off I have to praise the author for viably improving their grammar and writing style as the chapters go on. There is a very obvious difference between the first few chapters to now. They've thought about their monsters and classification systems quite a bit and there's a lot of fun to be had there. But the character still fall flat, especially the side characters(understandably this is hard to do, I have problems fleshing out my side characters too). The main issue I have is that the story is still difficult to understand. The dialogue and some other content is very curt, which gives a disruptive reading flow, But again the vast improvement so far is great sign of things to come. Keep working at it author! I support you!