Review Detail of DriftingCloud123 in WIFE!!!! PLEASE BITE ME!!

The story is great and the premise too. It has much potential. The chapters are to short so in chapter 10 is still too early to tell much about background or character development, But is going well. I only notice two things in which I would give some advice: It can get confusing some times with the pov changes, you can use lines or leave double space when the pov changes to make it more clear. It has some grammar problems that can be fixed with some proofreading and editing. You can even download some software to help you with the grammar. ( don't expect miracles, they make lots of mistakes, but they also help a lot.)