I’m going to be honest. I feel as if I’m reading a draft for a book rather than an edited and proofed story. If I may give you some advice; take your time to write and proofread your own chapters often. Keep writing and improving and I’m sure you’ll be writing quality novels in no time! Don’t worry to much about the grammatical errors, (everyone makes them, me as well) get a spellcheck app and it will fix your problems. I believe the concept is good, I plan on keeping your book in my library. I’m very curious as to how it will turn out.
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