Review Detail of PsyberRose in WIFE!!!! PLEASE BITE ME!!

It has immense potential with the Supernatural characters. Writing Quality: Not that bad though it could be better. You could try Grammarly, a free editing programme to help you with some of the basics. I would also recommend that you always make a break or introduction whenever a different POV is given. It can get quite confusing to read otherwise. Stability of Updates: Too soon to tell but a 5* in good faith. Story Development, Character Design and World Background: Doing this in one shot as the comments overlap for me: The various types / races makes the novel interesting. The story is developing nicely and you wonder about the connection between all of them. Overall, like I said, this novel has potential. All the best!