Review Detail of Nzoputa in WIFE!!!! PLEASE BITE ME!!
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I really like your story nut there were a lot of problems, like a lot. Firstly the grammatical errors were way too much, but the story was interesting. Also, it was really difficult to read at some points because of the change in pov. They need to be more organized. You should think about getting an editor or a proof reader. Either ways as I've said the story is interesting. And I enjoyed reading it (minus the mistakes).
WIFE!!!! PLEASE BITE ME!!
Miss_Lazy
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From the beginning. If you reread it you'll find what I'm talking about. Sentence construction in some places weren't too good. You just need an editor or something :)
Miss_Lazy:Which parts has many grammar error.
NzoputaLv4Nzoputa
Uhm I'm not really sure, maybe a friend you have who is good at English can help you or you can ask in the forum for one.
Miss_Lazy:Where can I find an editor. I'm not.really good at.English
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Nzoputa:Uhm I'm not really sure, maybe a friend you have who is good at English can help you or you can ask in the forum for one.