Review Detail of hiiamme123 in NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE

I only read a bit of the first chapter and skimmed the rest but OMFG is this absolute shit. In the past I have read atleast 150 chapters of that Google translated shit that even if you read a sentence 6 times you still can’t find out what it was trying to say. And this has less common sence then that. I can’t believe it. A car has no breaks in the mc’s world. If you are helping an old man cross the road you are behind him pushing with 2 meter sticks. If a God-like being answeres a question ‘too fast’ he is angry. Atleast get the MC’s death right. There are countless other people who have and you failed at that simple task. He was walking on the sidewalk. A black cat walked infront of him, he thought nothing of it then. crows cawed up in the sky running from something then boom something hit him from behind and he saw black. Like this makes sence (hopefully) and it was pulled out my ass in less then 5 minutes. I know it is bad but it works. It could get better in future chapters but i don’t think so.