Review Detail of Extant in NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE

I like this, but the quick switching of the other characters is unnecessary and more disruptive. It would be better to do a third person perspective for all the other characters when a chapter is dedicated to a specific character. There also needs to be more details on what the other characters are doing. Such as: "Asuma bit down on his cigarette in shock as his eyes roamed over the crater for a few moments, taking in the destruction, before shifting his gaze to the boy lying in the center of the crater that caused this destruction. He had only a single thought in his head as he gazed down at the boy, (What kind of monster is this kid!?)" My example is not the best, but it gives you a small number of details that you can improve on.