Review Detail of Brymm in I Reincarnated As A Stick
Review detail
The novel has had a mediocre start. There is humor as to be expected from a novel in which the main character is a stick, but I find alot of the humor to be out of place in a novel of this type. Overall I expect it to become a good novel with the evolutionary lines, but currently it is mediocre with a lack of world development and odd parts that make a so called "god" leveled player seem like a noob.
I Reincarnated As A Stick
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Whenever ive played MMO's in the past ive replayed as all the classes and learned what I like most, as well as what im best at. Since hes a god tier player id imagine him to have done the same to find the 'ideal' build, but he seems to question and not rember much of the evolutions and such at the starter level classes. Overall the stories writing quality is good and I think it can go places. But the Main character dosent seem as experienced as id imagine a pro.
TrueDawn:I want to ask though, what parts make him look like a noob? Please do reply since I want to improve the story.
I see. Well Aurus has chosen to become a mage (Walnut race) in this life rather than play as a warrior (Mahogany race) in his previous life, which is why he looks undecided whenever he chooses his skills and evolutions. For the [SP Storage] skill though, he's basing it off the mage friends he has met in his past life, but for other things, he has to get a feel for it first. I'll change his personality though before the first volume ends, which makes him look more serious than he is now. Also, more world development incoming.
Brymm:Whenever ive played MMO's in the past ive replayed as all the classes and learned what I like most, as well as what im best at. Since hes a god tier player id imagine him to have done the same to find the 'ideal' build, but he seems to question and not rember much of the evolutions and such at the starter level classes. Overall the stories writing quality is good and I think it can go places. But the Main character dosent seem as experienced as id imagine a pro.
If you look at Asmongolds or Sodapoppins WoW accounts they have so many max level characters, I might be misunderstanding the inital game but most mmo's allow for multiple characters ( or sticks in this case ), even if he dosent reach max with his alts id imagine atleast past the middle stages. But overall I look forward to more updates and ill continue to read and update the review in the future.
TrueDawn:I see. Well Aurus has chosen to become a mage (Walnut race) in this life rather than play as a warrior (Mahogany race) in his previous life, which is why he looks undecided whenever he chooses his skills and evolutions. For the [SP Storage] skill though, he's basing it off the mage friends he has met in his past life, but for other things, he has to get a feel for it first. I'll change his personality though before the first volume ends, which makes him look more serious than he is now. Also, more world development incoming.
Brymm:If you look at Asmongolds or Sodapoppins WoW accounts they have so many max level characters, I might be misunderstanding the inital game but most mmo's allow for multiple characters ( or sticks in this case ), even if he dosent reach max with his alts id imagine atleast past the middle stages. But overall I look forward to more updates and ill continue to read and update the review in the future.