Review Detail of XOMatsumaeohana in Becoming A Tree Isn't That Bad, Right?

This is part of a review swap, valid for chapter 11 Writing Quality: 4/5 Not giving out the full 5 stars because although the writing flows well and helps form a picture in the readers mind. I believe there's still room for improvement. A few minor errors. Chapter 2--> "Moooo (.) - don't forget the fullstop Chapter 10- Its --> It'(s) She had finally --> (remove the had) She finally managed A thought once again found itself Lukes head (think there is a missing word here.--> found itself in Luke(')s head. • D_Don't just watch t_here --> D—on't just watch t—here Chapter 11- blocking his eyes, glinting (there's a space) Luke: ...---> should be ---> Luke, "..." The spacing for the paragraphs is really good though, we don't get a huge bunch of text. The best thing to do with minor mistakes is using editing writing software's like grammarly. Character Design: 5/5 For the character design, the MC is male Haven't read one of those in awhile. 🤔 The FL doesn't leave much of an impression yet. All I'm getting from the male lead too is that he's very uhh accepting of his situation? Despite his confusion, he isn't freaking out or panicking. Story Development and world background : The plot itself is very interesting. This is my third review for the writing contest tree prompt, but it takes on a different route then the other tree stories. By different route, I'm talking about the romance aspect. Writing a story regarding a tree is already difficult enough since the author is limited on movement and speech. But this allows the author to focus on the setting and character thoughts.