Reading this because of the event. This would get a higher review from me if it had a decent editor. Translation is hard, writing is hard. But an editor would help fix all the grammar mistakes. They are so frequent that it is a distraction trying to read the story. If I didn't need minutes read for the event I wouldn't have continued as far in as I have.
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