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Review Detail of Xye in The Inconceivable Flame: A Fallen Angel's Disguise

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Xye
XyeLv134yrXye

To start with, The FL in this novel should be full of darkness, over dramatic(poetic), mysterious & heartless BUT she's very contradictory... As the novel progresses, the FL shows some laid back, easy going and childishness that really contradicts her character.. As shows in some of her back story, it indicates that she's somewhat tortured or experimented BUT when her food fetish strikes, her being mysterious, heartlessness disappears... She really confuses me.. Her character does'nt convince me of being in the dark side but just being lonely-poetic that craves companions. As the novel progresses more the 'dark heartlessness' vibe disappears from her.. Most of the time she's genius & childish. She's trying to remember a memory that is tragic but the vibe she shows doesn't. The ML on this novel is also a genius but somewhat overbearing. He's viewpoint is somewhat different. He dotes on his younger siblings most especially Yuan, who acts like a thirteen to fifteen years old but in fact a n Eighteen years old lad(this bothers me coz his acting is not align with his age, or maybe his just too shielded by his older brother). This only shows that the ML's weakness is/are his siblings(most esp the younger bro). The characters needs stability(consistency) and growth... The story plot is actually interesting it hooks me BUT the character's attitudes confuses me...I may sound redundant but its really bothering for me. It takes time for me to read because I want to understand every part of it... I can still recommend this though, its still interesting to read.

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The Inconceivable Flame: A Fallen Angel's Disguise

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shipramani
shipramaniLv15shipramani

Don't bother to read & most definitely even try to understand bcoz it's beyond your understanding ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’

Xye
XyeLv13Xye

Back off, Buddy!!! ๐Ÿ˜‚ This is a REVIEW! The AUTHOR should learn positive and negative critiques to her/his work for more improvements, GOT That!?... I never said this novel is bad, it has a nice plot BUT characters for FL needs consistency...So, Author-san should learn from it..๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Xye
XyeLv13Xye

A pity for people like you.. ๐Ÿ˜‚ This is a REVIEW, if you don't know the meaning better search the internet, Authors should know positive as much as negative comments for her improvement... Haters of critiques like you will not grow ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

shipramani:Don't bother to read & most definitely even try to understand bcoz it's beyond your understanding ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’