Review Detail of XOMatsumaeohana in The Inconceivable Flame: A Fallen Angel's Disguise

This is part of a review swap valid for Chapter 18 Writing Quality: (5) (ू˃̣̣̣̣̣̣︿˂̣̣̣̣̣̣ ू) The author's writing quality is better than mine so offering advice feels awkward. This is one of those actually well written novels, with seldom any mistakes. So if you want good grammar, this story is for you. Character Design: (5)The female lead is very unique, maybe because she was raised as a guy. But I don't think that matters too much. Girls don't have to act girly, they can act the way our FL does. A strong character, but despite this she gives of the impression of being lonely sometimes. Story Development: (5) only seventeen chapters so far, but the pacing is good. The mysteries surrounding the FL background, and the build up relationship with the ML is not rushed. Instead the author takes his/her time with it. I'm interested in how the FL will fall in love with the ML considering her personality. Who will be the first one to fall in love? World Background: 5 stars for world background too, what can I say? There's no confusion at all and everything is explained setting wise. Overall; A good story that I will definitely keep in my novel and continue reading.