Review Detail of Chryiss in The Inconceivable Flame: A Fallen Angel's Disguise

Perhaps it’s because I’m not familar with your stories before where the background of the characters and world comes frkom, but after the first chapter, I had a little difficulty keeping track of all the namss and characters introduced. Also, the scene changes to the torturing to then the waking up from a nightmare to the shattering of another person’s belonging, they all didn’t connect in a cohesive fluid flow back to the beginning. I wondered how did she end up here? Why does she have different names? Again, all this might be due to me not being familiar with your previous stories, but for gaining first time readers, it’s important to include this info so that this story can be read and understood on its own. Besides that, great writing and storytelling overall!