Review Detail of phoenix_8888 in Masculine Third Miss Strikes Back!

I am sure that the author is trying their best to create an entertaining story however in all fairness I cannot give it a good review. Reason - its confusion and I do not know what am I reading nor am I being entertained. I selected the story based on the synopsis to try it out but after the first chapter, I felt lost. What is this story really about, who are the main/supporting characters, what exactly is happening? As for the grammar - fair and I'm being generous here. This story cannot stay in my library. I wish the author good luck.