Review Detail of WithJ in Of Moon and Earth

Updates I don’t have a problem with the update speed. Writing I had to focus to find errors, and even then, there were barely any grammatical errors. Your writing is superb with enough descriptions and dialogues to visualize what was happening between the characters and surroundings. Smooth transitions and story-telling. I wish the chapters are a big longer though. Characters As of writing this review, there are only 16 chapters. There’s not much to the character development yet and new characters are still being introduced. At the moment, I really like the MC’s carefree personality and her love for meat lol. I have a feeling, since it’s starting off so happily, it might be heading down an emotionally taxing path though. Guess we better enjoy the lighthearted comedy for now before chaos ensues. I’m also looking forward to the supporting romances (Mudan and Jiafeng?). And I wonder if Zhaoli is the male lead? It’s probably too early to tell though. However, the characters are progressing nicely and I look forward to their growth. World & Story I’ve no issues with the current pacing of the story and world design, especially since the chapters are rather short and it takes time to build worlds and flush out characters. I think the current pacing of the story is perfect. Even though the basic premise of this story is similar to other xianxia novels I’ve read before (by the way, I love xianxia and have read a ton), I still really like it and look forward to see what different things the author will do to make the story unique. Overall, the story is promising. I’ve added it to my library and will be waiting for further updates!