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Review Detail of XOMatsumaeohana in Of Moon and Earth

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Review Swap Valid as of Chapter 12 Writing Quality: 5/5 I'm not worthy to judge this masterpiece 😆 The authors writing style is a lot better than mine so I can't offer much words other than keep up the good work. This reminds me of an actual book than a book on WN. The writing is that good. Story Development: The development isn't too fast or too slow either. The pacing is very good and everything's explained at a steady pace but doesn't leave you feeling bored. Character Design: The authors elegant style of writing helps form a beautiful picture of the characters. I'm very interested to see how the author will focus on characters thoughts and feelings for further development. The relationships in this story feel real, like I said it feels like I'm reading an actual novel. There's no cliche relationships, everything is just so natural. World Background: I'm impressed, most writers such as myself tend to neglect word background due to being busy with other areas like character design and story development. But the author does this well and there's no confusion anywhere. overall: a well balanced story that I'm certainly keeping on my library. Can't wait to read more.

Of Moon and Earth

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Aww, thanks for your meaningful review! I am touched. I hope you enjoy what's to come!