Review Detail of TalenX in Profane Prince of Domination

So this is the sort of story that relatively easy to dismiss at first glance. It's a sort of wish fulfillment story with lots of the trappings of what you would expect from the genre. In short it's smut, and it's not terribly shy about admitting it. However it's also well written, with more than just that basic bare bones plot you might expect. The MC has some issues, but a lot of the characters are well thought out and have a place in the world where you'll feel they 'fit'. At this point the heroine's come in two distinct flavors, with a name and without. The heroines with a name have a place in the story and in general you can expect them to have some impact on both the story and the MC. The nameless ones are generally cannon fodder who attack the MC and then revenge is apparently a dish best served with mind altering pheromones. At the point of this review the story is still growing but has bits of sociopolitical intrigue and while it hasn't shown up as more than window dressing, it shows that the author has invested in the story to some degree and provides hints of things to come. Being honest there are parts where the story is a little rushed and events would have been more impactful if they had been drawn out a little more, but it's far and away better than a majority of the quick fiction stories you'll find excluding genre, and far and away better than most you'll find in the genre.