I think the writer could improve her writing style. However, I am thoroughly caught and trapped in this world. I am happy to say I am waiting for the future chapter. I am just hoping she would improve her sentence structures to help the story flow smoother. Aside from that be ready to be hook. At this point, there r still a lot of confusion in the story and to the writer current note on why the novel is on hold. The story goes that Mei Xing dies and is in the body of Li Na. But the writer said it wasn’t a reborn story. The story for that she has a twin sister, but the writer said she was an only child—unless the writer was referring to Li Na.?Then yes, Li Na is an only child and pretty an abuse one.
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