Review Detail of Count_Dantes in Tenchi Nura childhood as ryouta kise (continues at Tenchi Nura guardian of the multiverse)

1st thing first, do not look at the name of this story because with how everything is going, it will never happen.. This story is good if you like crossover without minding flaw but if you are picky, you will be fast to bite your nail trying to understand the world cause the world building is basically inexistant, we are just thrown into a world where everything exist but evryone is so good at hiding it that no one noticed any problem. As for character building, other than the main character and really close partner growing up once in a while, other are just bland with fixed personality. The writing is okay, readable english but it’s hard to follow who is talking at time. And finally, the story devellopment, even though it’s fast-paced , it still fall in place.