Review Detail of Marx_Cipriano in Spending My Retirement In A Game

Good enough, good characters I like the story But there are some problems Too many unnecessary bits and too unnecessarily slow Like, it's satisfying to see crafting in detail, but it's repetitive and boring. It repeat in a cycle until there's no more joy in reading him craft things You should know when to write detail and when to NOT write in details Sometimes it's better to skip things and not focus on them You should know what parts of the story are not needed