Review Detail of EveningSong in The Avarice System

This novel had potential. So much potential. HAD. Past tense. Before chapter 30 the author was weaving a rather good weak to strong novel with a not-dumb and non-stereotypical MC. Things made sense and our MC was getting stronger at a constant rate via hard work Again, all past tense. Then, for some reason which I am unable to fathom, around chapter 30 the author forces things into the most stereotypical revenge setting possible. We have random power ups for no reason, the destruction of the environment the MC is trying to improve for no believable reason, and the MC himself starts making stupid decisions. We have a genre change from slice of life / weak to strong to revenge fantasy / power fantasy. It reads as something incredibly forced and out of character. On top of all that there is the problem of gradually worsening grammar as the story evolves. Each new chapter is a little less polished then the one before it. I dropped the novel and cannot recommend that anyone reads this. To the author: I enjoyed the first 30 chapters or so friend. I would love to read one of your stories which continues in that same vein.