Review Detail of Adam in The Avarice System

Very mediocre writing quality from what I've read, I put corrections for the ones that I found annoying, story was on track to be one of my favourites before chapter 25, but after that just felt rediculously forced and random, if it ever gets re-written I'd love to continue, feels like it's feel do much more fluid I'd there was for shadowing and less impulsiveness from someone who supposedly almost took over the world