Review Detail of HollowGod in The Avarice System

So , this story is good , altough u get some plot holes here and there ( huppens) its a good read and a balanced system. Now the grammer , its averge i guess . The author uses the kid , blacksmith , mayor alot instead of adding the word needed before them. Anyhow if the author can fix his grammer by allitel bit it would be amazing