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AraAra
AraAraLv115yrAraAra

Actually, I like the story. Only the first time I read in the first chapter until I left the village after killing the blacksmith there I felt that this story was interesting. It's just that after leaving the village that's where it's falling apart, what is it about trying Rose's relationship? Not even putting this world background and not allowing the MC to learn the introduction of this world background. So after he left the village there was a very destructive disadvantage. I reviewed this novel based on my observations. Because I don't think you (the writer) can observe the story going forward because I see that you want to add badass to the MC

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The Avarice System

SadWanderer96

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SadWanderer96
SadWanderer96AuthorSadWanderer96

If you can get through volume 1, you might come back to reading this story. I don't force anyone if you are too disappointed to give it another try. It's your choice, the end of 1 volume is confusing and messy, so I can't blame anyone.

cade2065
cade2065Lv7cade2065

You should have put this in a spoiler.

ELord
ELordLv5ELord

is this novel harem? please tell me as i dont want to waste my time reading harem novel.

SadWanderer96:If you can get through volume 1, you might come back to reading this story. I don't force anyone if you are too disappointed to give it another try. It's your choice, the end of 1 volume is confusing and messy, so I can't blame anyone.
SadWanderer96
SadWanderer96AuthorSadWanderer96

I already answered this question, why I must waste my time answering your question... I plan 2 or 3 wives if every polygamy is a harem for you. I am so sorry, this novel won't be for you. Next time check comments of 1 chapter or replies to reviews...or whatever I will add it to the synopsis.

ELord:is this novel harem? please tell me as i dont want to waste my time reading harem novel.
ELord
ELordLv5ELord

You can add a tag saying polygamy/harem. Tat will solve ur problem of answering to people like me

SadWanderer96:I already answered this question, why I must waste my time answering your question... I plan 2 or 3 wives if every polygamy is a harem for you. I am so sorry, this novel won't be for you. Next time check comments of 1 chapter or replies to reviews...or whatever I will add it to the synopsis.
SadWanderer96
SadWanderer96AuthorSadWanderer96

I added it to the synopsis. If people ask me again, I will ignore them :) As for the tag, it's too early as I have a plan but it might not get into that way and there must be people to add the same tag as me. I don't understand people that cross the stories because of the harem or lack of it. It's stupid, it's not the main theme of the story. The funniest are wars between these 2 clans :D Another thing I don't see tags like monogamy and etc. Another thing is the entire tag system of web novel, I cannot just choose tags as I want. I don't have control over them, imagine if someone wanted to mess with me. There is a possibility to add tag 'stupid author' or 'terrible novel' and with a couple of accounts, anything is possible. Do what you want, pirates are free! I cannot force you into something, you don't want to be.

ELord:You can add a tag saying polygamy/harem. Tat will solve ur problem of answering to people like me
ELord
ELordLv5ELord

Actually the tags other people add are only visible to themselves(private tags). The tag tat the author add is what enables other people to see tags. U said why people bother with whether its harem or not? It becuz ppl have their taste. Some people prefer harem genre, some people dont, some people dont care. It like some people like sci-fi some people hate sci-fi bjt like fantasy., and some people could care less.

SadWanderer96:I added it to the synopsis. If people ask me again, I will ignore them :) As for the tag, it's too early as I have a plan but it might not get into that way and there must be people to add the same tag as me. I don't understand people that cross the stories because of the harem or lack of it. It's stupid, it's not the main theme of the story. The funniest are wars between these 2 clans :D Another thing I don't see tags like monogamy and etc. Another thing is the entire tag system of web novel, I cannot just choose tags as I want. I don't have control over them, imagine if someone wanted to mess with me. There is a possibility to add tag 'stupid author' or 'terrible novel' and with a couple of accounts, anything is possible. Do what you want, pirates are free! I cannot force you into something, you don't want to be.
SadWanderer96
SadWanderer96AuthorSadWanderer96

It doesn't work this way. You need more than 5 people to add the same tag for it to appear under novel. The author's tags work the same way as any other tags. There is no special menu to set them or change them. I need people to add tags for me or there won't be any tags under the story.

ELord:Actually the tags other people add are only visible to themselves(private tags). The tag tat the author add is what enables other people to see tags. U said why people bother with whether its harem or not? It becuz ppl have their taste. Some people prefer harem genre, some people dont, some people dont care. It like some people like sci-fi some people hate sci-fi bjt like fantasy., and some people could care less.
Luft_Rauser
Luft_RauserLv6Luft_Rauser

Psst, hey. Don't drop it okay.

SadWanderer96:If you can get through volume 1, you might come back to reading this story. I don't force anyone if you are too disappointed to give it another try. It's your choice, the end of 1 volume is confusing and messy, so I can't blame anyone.
SadWanderer96
SadWanderer96AuthorSadWanderer96

Don't worry. I have currently a busy period of time at my university. Despite the really limited time, I revise the plot in the first volume. Probably, next week I will update old chapters and release new chapters. Mayor plot doesn't change, however, I try to rewrite some scenes and dialogues.

Luft_Rauser:Psst, hey. Don't drop it okay.
Luft_Rauser
Luft_RauserLv6Luft_Rauser

Sure~ psst. Have any discord server?

SadWanderer96:Don't worry. I have currently a busy period of time at my university. Despite the really limited time, I revise the plot in the first volume. Probably, next week I will update old chapters and release new chapters. Mayor plot doesn't change, however, I try to rewrite some scenes and dialogues.
SadWanderer96
SadWanderer96AuthorSadWanderer96

Not at this moment. It will be created someday :D

Luft_Rauser:Sure~ psst. Have any discord server?
IdHc
IdHcLv4IdHc

Actually, tags do seem to be set by the audience. I've seen some novels that had both a NTR tag and NO NTR tag at the same time, and many things similar to that. The author has no control over that. I'm not sure how to feel about that since authors could fail to tag things that are important to a lot of readers, but sometimes readers can be stupid about their judgments. For example: They can dislike gay jokes, even though they are just jokes, and put a yaoi or yuri tag on the novel even if it was a joke. While I can understand disliking those two genres(frankly, I hate them), a joke here and there doesn't warrant the tag. At the same time, I'm not sure if I want the author to have full control since they could remove something like beta mc or NTR because they do not like it, when it happens to be true. Honestly, I'd rather have the audience battle it out in the tags than having it controlled by a biased author, if it came down to it.

ELord:Actually the tags other people add are only visible to themselves(private tags). The tag tat the author add is what enables other people to see tags. U said why people bother with whether its harem or not? It becuz ppl have their taste. Some people prefer harem genre, some people dont, some people dont care. It like some people like sci-fi some people hate sci-fi bjt like fantasy., and some people could care less.
ELord
ELordLv5ELord

oh the tag system has changed. now the people can't add tags, it the authors who add tags because of wat u just said.

IdHc:Actually, tags do seem to be set by the audience. I've seen some novels that had both a NTR tag and NO NTR tag at the same time, and many things similar to that. The author has no control over that. I'm not sure how to feel about that since authors could fail to tag things that are important to a lot of readers, but sometimes readers can be stupid about their judgments. For example: They can dislike gay jokes, even though they are just jokes, and put a yaoi or yuri tag on the novel even if it was a joke. While I can understand disliking those two genres(frankly, I hate them), a joke here and there doesn't warrant the tag. At the same time, I'm not sure if I want the author to have full control since they could remove something like beta mc or NTR because they do not like it, when it happens to be true. Honestly, I'd rather have the audience battle it out in the tags than having it controlled by a biased author, if it came down to it.
IdHc
IdHcLv4IdHc

has it changed? Last I checked it was the same, unless the authors just neglected to take off tags on the stories I checked recently. Well either way my opinion about it stays the same. It would make sense since I've been seeing more stories with little to no tags.

ELord:oh the tag system has changed. now the people can't add tags, it the authors who add tags because of wat u just said.
WangZiHan
WangZiHanLv14WangZiHan

How come this comment's reviews discuss about tags...... 😒😒😒😒😕😑

Shadowlock9
Shadowlock9Lv12Shadowlock9

dude how come you can put spaces in your response but not your book wth angery I had to skip 2 whole ch and still could not read [img=faceslap]

SadWanderer96:If you can get through volume 1, you might come back to reading this story. I don't force anyone if you are too disappointed to give it another try. It's your choice, the end of 1 volume is confusing and messy, so I can't blame anyone.