Writing, Updates, World: 5 Story, Character: 4 Although the story is slowly building up to something big, it hasn't yet reached that gripping point which really hooks readers at least plot-wise. This has many of the same events familiar to transmigration stories, but what makes this stand out is its writing of it. Beautiful writing with good detail, vocabulary, and description. It's not any plain, old, typical webnovel quality, but stylistic writing of the Author's. MC's are hard to make well, and I have a good impression of this one. The FL isn't weak nor arrogant/brash. The Prince, while short on his encounter, also doesn't come off as completely annoying or power hungry. The rest of the characters have yet to make a substantial impact or come across distinctively, but this is only the beginning, and I think we will have that very soon. This story is still building its foundations, and it has done it very well. At this point, the most enjoyable point would be the writing which immerses one into the world and story. But I imagine soon, the plot and character development also will really shine. Great work!
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