Review Detail of DelvinMalory in Kill The Protagonist

Good plot, I like the creativity it just needs better implementation of characterization for example the king should stay in character of being a prideful asshole of a king so he should know better than to beg on his knees. And of course structuring a good plot is the key if you want this story to be good and not stray to the wrong path. A little more work on your choice of words but overall its good i like the idea of the mc fighting through the stigma of clichéd novels.