Review Detail of Yama_Kame in Fire Mage

Writing Quality-Some grammar mistakes and mess ups on tenses happen every chapter, but it's not terrible. Story Development- Generally, the story is fine, but there's a lot of BS. "Destiny" is a major theme of this book so the MC is constantly being harassed and manipulated by the gods or powerful "secret" organizations to do what they want whether he knows he's being influenced or not. It's pretty annoying to read about a character like this who can only continue to exist because of plot armor. I wish the author would just not have destiny and manipulation as a primary theme. Character Design- Quite a few characters are generic. Not much I can say about that. Updating Stability- Pretty obvious here. The author hardly misses a day, but chapter length can vary pretty widely. World Background- I like it and it's enjoyable. Just the divine stuff needs to take a back seat. I want him to be his own entity yet every "mission" he's sent on is generally him trying to find out who is manipulating his "destiny" this time around.