Review Detail of Gourmet_DAO in The Taleweaver

Probably I will write not quite a typical review. Even if you want objectivity, it will still be subjective. In a good review, you need to praise the author, scold him, point out mistakes and give advice for corrections. But this can only be advised by a writer, writer, literary critic. I'm a techie, so I will write what I think and feel while reading your novel. I hope that such a review will be useful to you as an author, or at least interesting. ... Fantastic, cosmos ... for some reason, other novels immediately come to my mind ... Star Trek - Chekhov, Spock, Kirk, Leonard McCoy, Hikaru Sulu ... and then the image emerges from Crest of the Stars written by Hiroyuki Morioka Sensei and the continuation of the novel pentalogy ... ... or the Russian writer Boris Stern. Inspection of "Smuggler's Flight" ... and then you read this novel ... is it unusual ... does it seem to be a breed on StarTrek? and very interesting, thin ... or it just seemed to me ... ... And now it seems that the first chapters. like a movie screensaver ... The action itself here in the third chapter ... as if we are again returning to the newest history, reality. It is pleasant that the chapters are small, clearly stated, it is clear what is at stake. The first chapters were fascinating, full of tragedy, dynamism, but were perceived as chronicles of the documentary. The third chapter - returns the reader to the modern world. On the one hand, verbal fencing in the East is perceived as likosti and toughness, but only in relation of the elder to the younger. Otherwise, like rudeness, which leads to a problem in the future. But it is in the East, in the West other traditions. And this is already a case of a more captivating one, Chapter 5 ... well, I will read further, as long as I can read 4.4 points from what I read. I will slowly read, thanks to the author, for the opportunity to read an interesting job to brighten up the summer vacation. Respect If the author is interested, I will continue to write tomorrow ... my thoughts about this novel Respectfully,