Review Detail of Crytach in GameShark System In the World Of Pokemon

I honestly cant read more, I tried, I got up to chapter 8 and my brain couldn't take it, I am going to be perfectly honest, I am sure you are not a native english speaker and I respect you for writing outside of your comfort zone, but you really need help with grammar and punctuation, you are missing almost every quotation mark in the story. Its hard to transition between speaking and background info when there isn't a clear divide between the two, my recommendation, use grammarly or even Microsoft Word spell check, there is a huge amount of resources online that are free, use them, see where you go wrong and use that to improve. good luck