Review Detail of Silverleaf7 in The Pleasure Lord

Yeah I really enjoy storyline so far and my only 2 problems are all the negative comments (if you don't like it leave if you're not reading for sex and shenanigans be gone)and the bad grammar like I get missing words or misspellings our brains can actually correct it without us noticing but using 1st 2nd and 3rd person sometimes in the same sentence annoying but still good job with the overall I'm going to continue reading and hope Author will improve as we progress maybe one day go back and fix some for future readers