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Review Detail of usernanne in One Piece The Over( Abandoned )

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usernanne
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The writing quality is ****: "he fell like he was flooding in water" "When he understands that he was fetus inside his mother's womb. " The story itself seems to be just a giant power wank. At the age of 5 he is already stronger than vice captains or so the story says. I haven't even fully read the first chapter and already hate it.

One Piece The Over( Abandoned )

13th_Night

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13th_Night
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Is something wrong with my writing, and how can he overlook if he isn't OP. Anyway thanks for the review.

StressedByHW
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You must not like Overpowered character even when its really not that overpowered

13th_Night
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Is it good?

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usernanne
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https://***.royalroad.com/fiction/17173/bloom

StressedByHW:You must not like Overpowered character even when its really not that overpowered
StressedByHW
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oof I can’t check I’m on phone

usernanne:https://***.royalroad.com/fiction/17173/bloom
StressedByHW
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Nvm just searched it and read a little I’m really not into it since I like Overpowered Mc I don’t really like any novel that makes mc overpowered after 20-30 chapter

usernanne:https://***.royalroad.com/fiction/17173/bloom
usernanne
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maybe, but you will never find a more overpowered MC

StressedByHW:Nvm just searched it and read a little I’m really not into it since I like Overpowered Mc I don’t really like any novel that makes mc overpowered after 20-30 chapter
StressedByHW
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What chapter did he start to get overpowered on

usernanne:maybe, but you will never find a more overpowered MC
StressedByHW
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This one piece book was good and started good until he decided to join luffy crew

usernanne:maybe, but you will never find a more overpowered MC
usernanne
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If I remember right then after the first 5 chapters he is OP already but he just continues to grow to really unreasonable heights through the story.

StressedByHW:What chapter did he start to get overpowered on
StressedByHW
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Alright

usernanne:If I remember right then after the first 5 chapters he is OP already but he just continues to grow to really unreasonable heights through the story.
usernanne
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Also if you are so into the whole "reincarnated and then grow crazy powerful thanks to foreknowledge" then this fic is your thing: https://***.royalroad.com/fiction/2148/joie-de-vivre I read it when I was younger and I remember it breaking all my expectations

StressedByHW:This one piece book was good and started good until he decided to join luffy crew
StressedByHW
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If the mc is the type that tries to save everyone then I’m not reading I like this mc that is badass

usernanne:Also if you are so into the whole "reincarnated and then grow crazy powerful thanks to foreknowledge" then this fic is your thing: https://***.royalroad.com/fiction/2148/joie-de-vivre I read it when I was younger and I remember it breaking all my expectations
usernanne
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I don't remember. I just know that it it will blow your mind

StressedByHW:If the mc is the type that tries to save everyone then I’m not reading I like this mc that is badass
StressedByHW
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Alright I’ll check it rn

usernanne:I don't remember. I just know that it it will blow your mind