Review Detail of tiki_iria in Mr. Tycoon's Daring Wife

I started this for the event but a badge isn't worth it. Another victimized girl, another fiance that breaks her, another rescue the broken op FL love story. And consistency is lacking. If you want to resurrect military ranks that were shortened to Major General in the 1800's at least be consistent with Sergeant Major General not Major General, Sergeant General, Segeant Major. Beyond the grandfather's intentional name changing their are too many other name inconsistencies. I can ignore the he/she his/her etc mixups usually but having to reread so often to figure out what was meant got old. I expected better from a novel that's part of an event. Chapter after chapter of the FL being a bored stubborn annoying patient in the hospital was annoying. If meeting the girl similar to the FL was so important it could have been done without so many other boring hospital chapters