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Review Detail of shelwyn in The Bumpy Road of Marriage: The Ex-Wife Is Expecting

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shelwyn
shelwynLv154yrshelwyn

Story reads like your typical divorce romance with a don't need no man female lead and a possible gay male lead who divorced for a couple side hoes. He also acts angry and domineering and seems to have been sheltered from the world by enormous walls of cash. Usually I'll be able to take a star away for some small error in translation or even two for a lot of them but I didn't notice anything so 5 seats on translation. I can usually deduct a few stars for a small release chapter count but these guys went above and beyond with 22 chapters on release. Wow very nice. I can finally nit pick on the story development. The plot is fleshed out well but it's annoying to read veiled conversations and references to other characters behaviors without having them actually named up until then. 4 stats. Character design is only okay, if I could rate 3.5 starts I would it iant so bad as a 3 stars but 4 stars is a bit much. The male lead is like a wood block who onl knows how to act angry and domineering. The antagonist female is nearly braindead and super horny for hot guys and big walkers kind of ridiculous. Mc is a sassy girl who dont need no man. There hasn't been any introduction into the world setting, I can only assume it's based in reality (China). I doubt its magical realism but no world building yet. 3 stars. So far we have don't need no man female MC, idiot easy to scheme against Male MC, Father who disowned female MC, step sister MC and her mom who want everything the rich dad has. The female MC mother was schemed against and throw out by new madam of the family. The male MC has a gay love interest and has declared himself gay on national television along with another beautifully gay CEO. Also the antagonist sister is already planning to kill off the female MCs child, the child being the only reason this story started in the first place. Oh yeah female MC has a token best friend who's dumbfounded by everything.

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The Bumpy Road of Marriage: The Ex-Wife Is Expecting

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shelwyn
shelwynLv15shelwyn

Wow that is a lot of grammar errors LOL. That's what I get for writing a small essay on my phone keyboard lol.

burntpotato
burntpotatoLv6burntpotato

Thanks for a detailed review, I thought I'm on NU.

oXvXo
oXvXoLv4oXvXo

One about the last part i dont think they are actually gay as the "gay intrest " has a woman outside

MaryCross
MaryCrossLv5MaryCross

True

shelwyn:Wow that is a lot of grammar errors LOL. That's what I get for writing a small essay on my phone keyboard lol.
FragrantMoonTree
FragrantMoonTreeLv14FragrantMoonTree

Lots of people don't differentiate between gay and bisexual. Bisexual is probably the relevant term here.

oXvXo:One about the last part i dont think they are actually gay as the "gay intrest " has a woman outside
Justine_Tang
Justine_TangLv10Justine_Tang

true