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Review Detail of Ardhitap in The Star Prince's Gender Bender

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Ardhitap
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Writing quality n update stability are really good in my opinion. Concept of story n protagonist are also unique in comparison to majority of stories on webnovel. But description about the world characters live in n what is actually their power or aura are, how it works, their category n etc are kinda lacking so I can't understand it fully. Though its only my opinion n maybe only me that don't understand it but others do

The Star Prince's Gender Bender

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Reckeva
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Thanks for the review! That’s very helpful to know. I actually tried to keep the descriptions/explanations of aura and the world (and only mention them when relevant) to a minimum because I wanted it to be gleaned through text as one reads, so that it would focus more on action and dialogue (and in extensions the characters). But I guess I was too sparse in the beginning and made it confusing for you and possibly other readers. Because you’ve brought it to my attention, I think I might create an auxiliary chapter or two explaining aura and the world, but I don’t know when I’ll be able to complete them.

Ardhitap
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Thank u. That will help me a lot :)