I just realized that the author is copying Dragon Ball Redux by DuncanIdaho2014. He just put the instant mastery to change the story line a little bit but he is taking huge chunks out of that story and inserting a little bit of his writing but it's actually making the story worse. Anyone reading this review read the original it's a lot better.
PinkBlack26
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LIKEBro I would have zero problems if you took inspirations from other fanfics. But you took huge chunks and just decided to copy paste it. Thats not a fanfiction that's just being a ******.
PinkBlack26:great you find out, but that's not the only one, I admit it. I do it purely for fun and the FANFIC's i traced is already dead. and i ask you what the meaning of FANFIC in the firs't place. i never claim anything, i never make money form it. and i never said mine's better!
yeah sorry about i being that censor word, and sorry if ever i hurt your feeling or people that i scraped his/her dead fanfic. but come, must you use that censor word? i already admit what i do. what more i can do for you happy, except delete this story?
KnightShade420:Bro I would have zero problems if you took inspirations from other fanfics. But you took huge chunks and just decided to copy paste it. Thats not a fanfiction that's just being a ******.
PinkBlack26:yeah sorry about i being that censor word, and sorry if ever i hurt your feeling or people that i scraped his/her dead fanfic. but come, must you use that censor word? i already admit what i do. what more i can do for you happy, except delete this story?
thank you very much, will learn how to write strory without scraping again later. english is not my main. i don't know how to write correct grammar and spelling in english, even in my main langguage. i'm bad at it.
KnightShade420:All-right sorry for using ******.