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Review Detail of Avan in Doomsday Pillars

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Avan
AvanAuthor3yrAvan

After 2 years and 300+ chapters, I will give my second review of my own work. Hope it will help you to decide to read the novel 1. It was first written for kingdom building competition, so there are a few base buildings in the story. you will see MC travel around the world-famous cities and prepare them for the apocalypse. 2. It's a slow start, I like to build my characters and there actually some chapters that would focus on other characters, but please be patience these characters will give meaning to the story later on. 3. You will not see any OP power of the MC until later volume. (its an interesting one) 4. This is a 2 years old novel, so you can see that the writing will improve in the later chapters. 5. There will be romance - but sorry No Harem The novel is part of a bigger universe with my other novel. so world-building is where I spent a lot of my research and thought in. hope you enjoy it. thanks

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Doomsday Pillars

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_Felix_
_Felix_Lv13_Felix_

Ok dang no harem

HentaiConnoisseur
HentaiConnoisseurLv3HentaiConnoisseur

Thank god no harem... Now with that all cleared up i can start the series šŸ„³šŸ„³šŸ„³

_Cardinal
_CardinalLv12_Cardinal

Yey! no harem!

r4izel
r4izelLv14r4izel

Ok I will give it a try. Good job on 300s chapters anyway. Keep up the good work!

Alcheluk
AlchelukLv11Alcheluk

This sneak peak just encourages to read both novels ! :)

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Weak_Hiro
Weak_HiroLv10Weak_Hiro

god.... it's okay although I was expecting A harem still this is a masterpiece and I'm also looking forward to the awesome harem yer building for my boi Emery... ą²” Ķœ Ź– ą²”

novelfanatic
novelfanaticLv5novelfanatic

thanks -love from philippines

Izanagi
IzanagiLv15Izanagi

semangat terus. udah jalan 2 tahun dan sudah ada banyak perkembangan .[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Yahya_Zakarya
Yahya_ZakaryaLv12Yahya_Zakarya

i want to is the mc a hero who always forgive people and super kind

Justin_Richardsn
Justin_RichardsnLv14Justin_Richardsn

hope you finish it

Apocalypse_2ndLife
Apocalypse_2ndLifeLv3Apocalypse_2ndLife

SOO WHAT ABOUT THE SECOND GIRL'S FEELINGS(military granddaughter) ahhh ą²„ā€æą²„ I put it on hold long ago for more chapters just came back ... that girl was soo good also the girl from other country was there

Enticement
EnticementLv14Enticement

Will this be continued? I plan on reading this rn but it seems to have been dropped. If it is, then I'd rather not read a potentially excellent novel knowing I would immensely regret it once I reach the cliffhanger...

Avan
AvanAuthorAvan

yes next month it will start again

Enticement:Will this be continued? I plan on reading this rn but it seems to have been dropped. If it is, then I'd rather not read a potentially excellent novel knowing I would immensely regret it once I reach the cliffhanger...
ChaosAsura0
ChaosAsura0Lv1ChaosAsura0

Are you sure this isnā€™t a harem author. I feel like Alex needs to address aria. Tbh heā€™s not dumb he probably knows and he should tell her thereā€™s no chance.itā€™s better for her to move on quicker I feel like ur just dragging this i donā€™t know why Tbh I donā€™t know how a harem can work when heā€™s already married with kids who are 12. Tbh Iā€™m disappointed in her that she even still likes him after knowing his family.

Avan:yes next month it will start again
ChaosAsura0
ChaosAsura0Lv1ChaosAsura0

Is this novel still not a harem? Tbh he acts like he doesnā€™t have a wife and kids at home sometimes which is disappointing.

Avan:yes next month it will start again
Avan
AvanAuthorAvan

what chapters are you in right now..? cause Alex did. and yes this is not harem

ChaosAsura0:Are you sure this isnā€™t a harem author. I feel like Alex needs to address aria. Tbh heā€™s not dumb he probably knows and he should tell her thereā€™s no chance.itā€™s better for her to move on quicker I feel like ur just dragging this i donā€™t know why Tbh I donā€™t know how a harem can work when heā€™s already married with kids who are 12. Tbh Iā€™m disappointed in her that she even still likes him after knowing his family.
ChaosAsura0
ChaosAsura0Lv1ChaosAsura0

Iā€™m half way. What chapter was it if you can remember?

Avan:what chapters are you in right now..? cause Alex did. and yes this is not harem
Avan
AvanAuthorAvan

yep around halfway

ChaosAsura0:Iā€™m half way. What chapter was it if you can remember?
ChaosAsura0
ChaosAsura0Lv1ChaosAsura0

Do you know the chapter number šŸ„ŗšŸ„ŗ. And I hope you pick up the novel again soon

Avan:yep around halfway
ChaosAsura0
ChaosAsura0Lv1ChaosAsura0

Also you said there will be romance. I feel like you need to give his wife a power up in that cause so she has a reason to stick around when he goes on dangerous adventures. Idk how itā€™s going to work if sheā€™s always away from him

Avan:what chapters are you in right now..? cause Alex did. and yes this is not harem