Review Detail of Nightdrift in Doomsday Pillars

This novel gives me mixed feelings, the edited chapters are better, but different editors lead to vastly different levels of quality. While many of the ideas are a good mashup of the genre, this novel is purely and simply gutted by the lack of a good editor, I read a few of the originals before editors got involved, it was unreadable. After editors the first segment of the book transformed, it was enjoyable and entertaining. But it unfortunately deteriorated over time, as anyone who reads it knows, grammer and syntax got rather lax, lots of stuff stopped making sense with plot holes popping up, characters actions not matching their personalities, all to further the rapidly thinning plot. I hope this is all fixed, because if it isn't this novel is on a one way track to a death spiral.