Review Detail of Keyang27 in Doomsday Pillars

It’s hard to write a review for this story. On one hand, the author has a lot of creativity, and has created a remarkable world. There is a lot of world building, obvious research, and what looks like a lot of time and effort. The author has found a great niche in a genre that is usually just filled with the same bland cliche. I really want to explore and travel further with the story. On the other hand, this is definitely a work in progress. The author prefaces English is a second language for him, and unfortunately it shows. Personally, I found it really difficult to engage the story and submerse myself when I would have to re-read lines/sentences/paragraphs over and over to make sure I got the right meaning. For some people this is not a problem. If that’s the case, great, I thoroughly recommend this book to you. Unfortunately I was only able to make it through the first 29 chapter before I had to quit. I will keep an eye on this new author and once he becomes big a big enough name to have editors (which I am confident he will), I will definitely rejoin his world.