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Review Detail of Mistborn in Doomsday Pillars

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Mistborn
MistbornLv105yrMistborn

This is an excellent mashup of reincarnation/apocalypse genre. The main character is very relatable and you understand his motivations and goals clearly. The story is based in Indonesia, Bali and it’s very refreshing to see something other than American based for a change. So far there is no hyper nationalistic attitudes of thinking their ppl are somehow superior to every other nation with the urge to enslave everyone from other countries or something crazy like that. No misogyny or gratuitous violence / gore / r@pe etc. The main character is not over powered and just has an edge on others because of his experience. He is a family man and I doubt this will go down the route of him building a herem empire where he’s drowning in boooobs (thank heavens for that). I’ve seen people criticizing the novel for being slow, but I don’t agree. The author takes a valid amount of chapters to flesh out the characters and get the ball rolling. It’s called World building. Over all the grammar is the only weak point in this novel. Taking into account that English is not the authors first language, it’s still pretty good and doesn’t take away anything from enjoying this novel. There’s a decent number of chapters already out and seems like author is quite regular at giving us new chapters. The story, character and world background is fleshed out enough and more would be revealed as the story unfolds. The novel deserves more love and recognition than it currently has gotten. I would highly Highly recommended this novel to others.

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Doomsday Pillars

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Avan
AvanAuthorAvan

thank you for taking the time to review, this really makes my day. currently in search of an editor, so yes hopefully the quality will improve, thanks for being a wonderful reader.

Login_Achieved
Login_AchievedLv4Login_Achieved

Just out of curiosity where are you finding American based MCs? I don't think I have ever encountered one.

LokiMaster
LokiMasterLv14LokiMaster

I was gonna read it but idk how i feel about him having a family with two kids right off the bat...

BookAholic
BookAholicLv13BookAholic

Supreme Magus is about an American

Login_Achieved:Just out of curiosity where are you finding American based MCs? I don't think I have ever encountered one.
Derric_Winters
Derric_WintersLv15Derric_Winters

why not it makes it to where the MC is more relatable and is family driven. I've only read a chapters and I'm currently also ready 10 other novels.

LokiMaster:I was gonna read it but idk how i feel about him having a family with two kids right off the bat...